Excellent
Great work my friend. I especially loved the organ part, but not so much the violin part, I felt that that part was too calm and quiet for this style of song. What would really beef that part up is if you add another violin playing the thrids of each note on top of the first one, and then turn up the drive a little bit.
All in all, an enjoyable selection.
A Review
It pretty good for an ambient kind of setting in an RPG. I couldn't imagine where though.
Aha, eh...
The big thing is the synth voice saying, "Japan Weh-rih-ores". It threw me off for the rest of the piece. I was so distracted by it that I could not really concntrate on the actual music.
For an immediate tip, try typing the words into your synth voice program as they are pronounced; not as they are spelled. (Example: "Japan War e erz" this works; I tried it on the same program.)
Aw, man
At that first pause, I was so expecting a sudden drum fill followed by a melody.
This would have been great, if there was more of a melody, instead of just a looping guitar.
Beautiful
Wonderful arrangement. The flute sounded magical. The one thing I could have hoped for was some sudden explosion (much like the one decribed in a previous review).
In addition, there was more of an ending than your others pieces have. That's good.
Uh, hmm...
This loop seems a bit, well, grating. Kind of a shock with the volume and all. As an added problem, you cut it off with no real end; it just kind of starts to do something, and then cuts. Not your best work, but okay.
Hallelujah!!
We have a winner!
Movement and grace combined with the warm sounds of a full orchestra backing it all up, with that extra little bit to top it all off; the Commodore main line! Write more of this quality!
The only thing that I am not 100% pleased about is the abrupt end. It sounds like you got fed up with this song and cut it out before its time.
Love it
I cant think of how to make this much better. It could use a different name, but that's beside the point. Great job.
Plus, I play the main instrument! Trombone, all the way! \m/. /''''''''''''''\ .\m/
Good!
I like this song, because it has depth. The one thing that I could hope for beyond what you have already done, is for it to have a little more prominent of a melody.
Alright
Any specific reason why it cuts out like that at the end?
But all around this song is alright! I like it, but it doesnt seem to move. It's missing that special something that would make it extrordinary.
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